Overall Pretty Good
I found it pretty funny. I like your art style, and your sense of writing's pretty good. Overall, not bad, but at some parts I found it kinda dragged a bit. Also, I think a lot of the animation needs a tune-up, it's pretty choppy most of the time.
Maybe put just a LITTLE bit of more time into your next video? Because I'm surprised how quickly you finished this, your previous cartoon was released just over a week ago. But you seem far more than capable of making a pleasant little comedy, I just think you should put more time and effort into the animation is all.